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Traction and visual storytelling are saviors during a tough fundraising year

Investors may be racing through decks, but they slow down for traction and a vision statement you can back up with numbers.
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Winston MokFounder, Woosh Air
December 13, 2022
Traction and visual storytelling are saviors during a tough fundraising year

I started my year with some ominous news from YCombinator: “No one can predict how bad the economy will get, but things don’t look good. The safe move is to plan for the worst.”

In 2021, I quit my job as a Google product manager to do what most founders do: solve a problem I couldn’t stop thinking about. During the 2019 California wildfires, air purifiers had sold out and  San Francisco’s air quality index was over 150, unhealthy for everyone. Then the pandemic hit, and working from home made me realize that the average home air filter is rated at Merv 6, which doesn’t catch smoke, bacteria, or viral carriers. This is why I started Woosh Air, a smart air filter system. 

My company vision and story resonated with a lot of investors. Even before I had a working prototype, I raised my pre-seed round in 2021. The round happened very quickly, with the first million filling up within a week. Then another $250,000 came in just as quickly, and we were done.

Now I’m raising our seed round in a more challenging market, and I’m learning a lot about what it takes to fundraise in 2022. What I’m discovering is that while, yes, fundraising is taking longer than it did before, you can see success if you focus on a few things: traction, intentionality, and visual storytelling.

Let traction replace the instant, “Wow!” of 2021

It’s not as hot a market as it was last year—investors aren’t going to immediately say, “Whoa!” when you pitch your product. Now even seed companies need clear traction, demand, and a go-to-market strategy. 

A large portion of my pitch is dedicated to building up to the traction slide, which is the showcase piece of the entire deck. Traction now seems to be 50% of my entire pitch. I emphasize our roll call, the partners we're lining up, our potential sales, and our successful channels. Compared to our pre-seed stage, the current pitch deck has moved further away from the product itself. 

This approach seems to be validated by DocSend research, which shows that investors are spending 28% more time on the traction section in 2022. In this fundraising environment, traction is the takeoff point. When you’ve done the work, the numbers will speak for themselves. So it’s not surprising that investors are also spending 56% less time on the solutions section for successful decks—if the traction is there, this is what’s mostly likely to get you funded after some preliminary interest. 

That being said, I always make sure to end every investor conversation with a vision statement that’s pretty far out. I’ve spent a lot of time refining this section, so that when I describe my long-term vision, investors sometimes say, “Whoa, I didn't know that was possible.” 

Visual, tactile storytelling holds short attention spans during a pitch

Attention spans on the investment side are short these days. You need to know what pulls on the heartstrings and what doesn't. 

My story is tied to the California wildfires. I have an eight-month-old kid, and I care deeply about the air they breathe. I also built my air filters with my own two hands—I didn’t hire people to do it. In meetings, I show my air filters quickly and make it clear to investors: “You're talking to the person who built this with their own arms.” This is a story I tell visually alongside a shortened deck, because it’s what’s going to hold attention during a meeting. In your pitch deck, on the other hand, you need to keep it concise.

According to DocSend’s seed round report, investors are spending less time than ever reading through decks, which means prioritizing concise storytelling that doesn’t overwhelm investors with too many details. This is why I make part of my pitch like watching a mini TV show, where I actually show how Woosh Air filters are installed in people’s homes. My appearance on Shark Tank prepared me for this type of pitch, so that I can keep people excited.  

Focus on getting to the meeting, not a “spray and pray” of your pitch deck

When I started raising my seed round, my internal advisory board recommended I not share a long, conventional pitch deck up front and instead focus on a big push to get to the meeting. The intention was to move away from the “spray and pray” strategy to being a lot more intentional. The thought was that I would need a shorter deck, which risked losing context—but if I focused on getting to the meeting, the pitch itself would be a lot more meaningful. So this time I’m focusing on contacting fewer investors, but also making sure I’m contacting the right investors. 

This efficiency has been so important for my seed fundraising process. I'm putting in more quality time to tell my story, which I only have so much energy to do! My story is so personal—it might sound weird, but I can’t tell my story to a lot of people because it takes so much energy and emotion. 

Luckily, data seem to be on my side. In 2022, founders are contacting 25% fewer investors—but they’re holding 25% more meetings for a successful raise. This shift captures something I’ve been feeling this year: A lot of investors are still eager to invest, but the ones making deals are more discerning. 

Many people also seem to think that in a bad market, you need to go wild with contacting as many people as possible—but this just isn’t true. According to DocSend’s data set, many successful founders raised their seed rounds by reaching out to 80 or fewer investors. More time-consuming investor outreach strategies seem to yield diminishing returns.

During these harder times, I encourage everybody to be more focused, put more of your heart in your story, and have humility. It’ll go a long way to telling a good story that will keep investor attention just long enough for you to get to that traction section that closes the deal.

Download the full report here to uncover the make-or-break factors in raising a seed round in today’s market.

About the Author

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Winston Mok

Founder, Woosh AirWinston Mok is the Founder of Woosh Air, a company focused on improving air quality and understanding the air we breathe. Previously, Winston was a Product Manager at Google, Techstars Alumni and early engineer at Blackberry.
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